Hello Kitty Hell

Comment from kristen
Time: November 14, 2009, 6:36 pm

page: http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/25/hello-kitty-nightmare-becoming-reality/

1st paragraph

When I began this blog, I thought I might receive a bit of sympathy from the readers…

There is a funny “” after thought

fixed – hkh

Comment from kristen
Time: November 14, 2009, 6:42 pm

page: http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/25/hello-kitty-nightmare-becoming-reality/

3rd paragraph

… because of the unfortunate fact that I do know too much about Hello Kitty.

There is a funny “” after that

fixed – hkh

Comment from kristen
Time: November 14, 2009, 6:43 pm

page: http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/25/hello-kitty-nightmare-becoming-reality/

4th paragraph

Actually knowing the answer to her question once again!Â

There is a funny “” after again!

fixed – hkh

Comment from Mel
Time: November 14, 2009, 6:52 pm

page: http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/free-hello-kitty-optical-mouse-and-mousepad/

4th(?) paragraph

I have been able to breath a sigh of relief…

‘breath’ should be ‘breathe’

fixed — hkh

Comment from jonni girl
Time: November 14, 2009, 7:42 pm

page: http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/16/it-aint-going-to-happen/

1st paragraph

All your pleading, whining and crying have absolutely no affect on me because basically, I don’t care.

- ‘affect’ should be ‘effect’
- needs a comma after ‘whining’
- ‘have’ should be ‘has’ or ‘will have’

They were all such minor mistakes that I included them in this one post. And I know you must hear this a lot but your blog is so funny! I personally only like Hello Kitty when she’s warped from her originally ‘cute’ image.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Brittney
Time: November 14, 2009, 7:46 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/04/21/hello-kitty-vogue/
Paragraph #1 “Hello Kitty will be on the cover of the June magazine and will be feature in a photo spread wearing the latest autumn/winter designs from Dior”

feature=> featured

fixed — hkh

Comment from Nga
Time: November 14, 2009, 7:50 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/16/it-aint-going-to-happen/
2. The blog post title
3. “Aint”, although technically not a word (but used in this case purposefully for humorous effect), needs a contraction apostrophe, like this: “Ain’t”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Brittney
Time: November 14, 2009, 8:02 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/12/hello-kitty-wedding-cake/
Paragraph #2 “and hedeserves to have the pity of men worldwide for the torture he is suffering”

hedeserves=> he deserves

fixed — hkh

Comment from Nga
Time: November 14, 2009, 8:03 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/13/hello-kitty-xmas-tree/
2. First paragraph, second sentence
3. “mater” should be “matter”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sarah
Time: November 14, 2009, 8:05 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/16/hello-kitty-burqa/

3rd paragraph
“Sent in by Crocadila (via ebay) who should have to wear a Hello Kitty burqu for the rest of her life as punishment for ever thinking that it would be a good idea to send this to me.”

“Burqu” is mispelled; it should be “Burqa”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Nga
Time: November 14, 2009, 8:27 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/04/hello-kitty-credit-card/
2. Paragraph that starts with “Update:”.
3. “patters” should be “patterns”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Mantelli
Time: November 14, 2009, 9:07 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/09/22/hello-kitty-face-stickers-for-men/
First paragraph, second sentence. It should read “heroin addict”, not “heroine addict”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from franchesca
Time: November 14, 2009, 11:22 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-hell-the-beginning/

Paragraph 5.

The line says…
“They exists, and they exist in numbers…”

It should say, “They exist, and they exist in numbers…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sylvie
Time: November 14, 2009, 11:51 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/hello-kitty-girl-mike-carroll-skateboard-decks/

First Paragraph

Hillary Duff (in a hyperlink) should be Hilary Duff with one L.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sylvie
Time: November 14, 2009, 11:53 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/06/25/hello-kitty-lcd-tv/

First Paragraph

“dissuaded form” should read “dissuaded from.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sylvie
Time: November 14, 2009, 11:56 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/09/hello-kitty-lady-gaga-markus-indrani-photos/

First paragraph

Currently says “My was already…” and is missing the word “wife” I’m assuming: “My wife was already…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sylvie
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:25 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/27/hello-kitty-emac/

First paragraph

Subject-verb agreement/grammar:
“When user of Apple products start…” should be “When users of Apple products start…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sylvie
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:31 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/12/hello-kitty-skis/

First Paragraph

Missing period
“but she has never really wanted to ski Of course, that was until…” should be “but she has never really want to ski. Of course, that was until…”

For the record, I’m bit anal about grammar…and am not just desperate to win the mouse/mousepad, although that is a perk.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Min
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:46 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/10/04/no-fire-in-hello-kitty-hell/

Second paragraph

toy start to flame. Of course, upon hearing this, I mentioned to my wife that Hello Kitty can be dangerous. Here answer? She brought out these:Â

There are some “”’s.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:08 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-hell-the-beginning/

2nd line of 2nd paragraph – there are two “the”s following each other, there should only be one.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:09 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-hell-the-beginning/

6th line of 6th paragraph – “has enabled my wife has turned Hello Kitty into a profitable business” – that makes no sense, should be “has enabled my wife to turn Hello Kitty into a profitable business”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:16 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-ferrari/

4th line of 3rd paragraph – “the” at the beginning of a sentence should be spelt with a capital.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:17 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-ferrari/

6th line of 3rd paragraph – there is a funny A after “more” which shouldn’t be there.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:22 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/05/hello-kitty-darth-vader/

4th line of 3rd paragraph – two funny As which shouldn’t be there. Also there should be quotation marks at the end of the quote, on line 5.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:23 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/05/hello-kitty-darth-vader/

2nd and 3rd lines of 4th paragraph – more funny As.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:24 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/05/hello-kitty-darth-vader/

2nd line of 5th paragraph – another funny A.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:34 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/10/05/hell-kitty-boxers/

4th line of 2nd paragraph – “The Purr-fect Pal!She’s The Cat’s Meow!” – thee should be a space after “Pal!”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Irit
Time: November 15, 2009, 8:31 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/06/hello-kitty-tattoo-plush/

Paragraph 2, line 7.

The word “the” is duplicated.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Irit
Time: November 15, 2009, 8:36 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/04/free-hello-kitty-shoulder-massager/

Paragraph 5, line 1.

“If you are interested in the black should massager,…” – it’s supposed to be “shoulder”, not “should” (but I can understand the mistake, considering the context).

fixed — hkh

Comment from Irit
Time: November 15, 2009, 8:39 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/04/hello-kitty-gumball-machine/

Paragraph 1, line 2.

The text should read “insists on”, not “insist in” (so there are actually TWO mistakes here).

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 9:04 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/22/hello-kitty-proof/

end of first paragraph…last sentence. “I think you’ll see my Hello Kitty Hell is that way.”

there’s a strange character after the word “see” that needs to be removed.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 9:10 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/17/i-know-more-about-hello-kitty-than-is-healthy/

second paragraph…”Can it get any worse that that?”

should be, “Can it get any worse THAN that?”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 9:18 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/25/how-hello-kitty-is-ruining-my-love-life/

second paragraph…”My wife and I are in a romantic mood the other night.”

should be…”My wife and I WERE in a romantic mood the other night.” past tense.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 9:23 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/11/04/hello-kitty-halloween-costume-iii/

first sentence…”It seems that the Halloween demons lead by the evil feline have decided…”

should be…”It seems that the Halloween demons LED by the evil feline have decided…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 9:27 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/09/20/hello-kitty-fanatic-on-tyra-banks/

first paragraph…”…that is so obsessed that she warrants time on the mid-day talks shows.”

should be…”…that is so obsessed that she warrants time on the mid-day TALK shows.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 9:38 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/31/hello-kitty-ipod-clock-radio-docking-station/

before and after the first photo of the radio, there is that weird  character.

should be removed.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 9:52 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/02/hello-kitty-tombstone/

second paragraph…”At first I chuckled to myself and that that this was extreme even by Hello Kitty Hell standards…”

the word “that” is repeated twice. it should probably read something more like, “At first I chuckled to myself and thought that this was extreme even by Hello Kitty Hell standards…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:04 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/08/hello-kitty-mask/

third paragraph…”asterix” is spelled wrong.

should be, “asterisk”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:10 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/22/hello-kitty-guitar-picks/

second paragraph…”I could go on a rant on why would my wife…”

should probably be, “I could go on a rant on why my wife…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:13 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/22/hello-kitty-guitar-picks/

second paragraph…”need a Hello Kitty guitar picks when she doesn’t play the guitar…”

should either be…”need a Hello Kitty guitar pick when she doesn’t play the guitar…” OR “need Hello Kitty guitar picks when she doesn’t play the guitar…”

singular or plural on the picks????

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:17 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/hello-kitty-girl-mike-carroll-skateboard-decks/

2nd paragraph – a full stop at the end of the sentence.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:21 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/02/164-million-platinum-hello-kitty-figure/

before and after the photo, there is that weird  character.

should be removed.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:23 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/22/hello-kitty-xm8-rifle/

4th line of 2nd paragraph – “It won’t be long before your see..” – “your” should be “you”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:24 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/02/164-million-platinum-hello-kitty-figure/

first paragraph…”This is apparently the most expensive Hello Kitty figure ever produced (which will undoubtedly be outdone next year because there is always a Hello Kitty fan that is willing to pay more)”

there is no period at end of sentence.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:28 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/02/164-million-platinum-hello-kitty-figure/

last paragraph…”I guess on the bright side, I be in a lot more Hello Kitty Hell if I made more money….”

should probably be something like, “I guess on the bright side, I’d be in a lot more Hello Kitty Hell if I made more money….”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:30 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/09/28/hello-kitty-louis-vuitton-bong/

5th line of 1st paragraph – “with either other one” – should just be “with either one”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:33 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/19/hello-kitty-usb-lap-warmer/

3rd line of 2nd paragraph – “I’m afraid their may be…” – “their” should be “there”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from jn
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:37 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/free-hello-kitty-optical-mouse-and-mousepad/

4th paragraph: “This fact makes this giveaway a bit riskier than the others, but has not lessened my determination…”

take out the comma between “others” and “but.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:39 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/07/26/hello-kitty-maneki-neko-crystal-doll/

7th line of 2nd paragraph – “she believe” – should be “believes”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from jn
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:39 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/free-hello-kitty-optical-mouse-and-mousepad/#comment-123484

4th paragraph: “…(especially since the cheeks on the mouse supposedly light up and I don’t want to have to spend a month listening to how cute and adorable that is every time my wife uses the computer).”

add a comma between “up” and “and” as this would otherwise be a run-on sentence.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Phil
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:40 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/07/26/hello-kitty-maneki-neko-crystal-doll/

5th line of 4th paragraph – “her attention – Either way…” – either should not be spelt with a capital.

fixed — hkh

Comment from jn
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:42 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/free-hello-kitty-optical-mouse-and-mousepad/#comment-123484

5th paragraph: “Entry into this contest is going to be a bit different than just leaving a comment and going to help me clean up this blog at the same time.”

“going to help me” should be replaced by “will help me.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from jn
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:51 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/free-hello-kitty-optical-mouse-and-mousepad/#comment-123489

7th paragraph: “I will have a random number generated for all the comments left below and whichever person’s comment matches the number, I will have my parents send them the mouse and mouse pad.”

Correction with less awkward phrasing: “I will have a random number generated for all comments left below. The person’s comment that matches the number will receive the mouse and mouse pad.”

If the fact that your parents are sending it out is crucial, then phrase this way: “The person’s comment that matches the number will receive the mouse and mouse pad, which will be sent out by my parents.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 11:10 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/29/hello-kitty-heels/
2. First paragraph, second sentence.
3. Comma with an introductory element

“Yesterday I was informed that my wife had ordered”
“Yesterday, I was informed…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 11:34 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/18/hello-kitty-barf-bag/
2. First paragraph, first sentence.
3. Occassion should be Occasion
“It is an extremely rare occassion when I’m sent a Hello Kitty photo that actually is appropriate to my plight:”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Alice
Time: November 15, 2009, 11:38 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/11/13/hello-kitty-costume-gone-horribly-wrong/

2nd Paragraph: there are 2 “it” words. Need to delete one “it”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 11:39 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/10/27/hello-kitty-dvd-nightmare/
2. Third paragraph, third sentence.
3. Occassion should be Occasion
“When it comes to gadgets like that, I usually have to negotiate over a long period of time to get the gadget, but on this occassion I received a “what a great idea!””

fixed — hkh

Comment from Alice
Time: November 15, 2009, 11:42 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/11/01/happy-birthday-hello-kitty-ouch/

5th paragraph: “for ever” should be “forever”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 11:58 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/04/hello-kitty-hell-lecture-and-photo-dump/
2. devasted should be devastated
3. “I’m not sure if I should feel honored by the request or devasted that Hello Kitty Hell has reached such depths…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from christy ann richmond
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:06 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/hkh-faqs/

7th paragraphish

Done.

fixed — hkh

Comment from christy ann richmond
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:08 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/08/

1st paragraph

It’s when I receive things like this in my email box that I know it’s going to be a horrendous Hello Kitty Hell day.

fixed — hkh

Comment from christy ann richmond
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:12 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/category/hello-kitty-drinks/

3rd paragraph

Want a someone to make you a Hello Kitty beer stein for your Hello Kitty beer?

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:16 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/09/27/hello-kitty-bluetooth-wireless-earphones/
2. End of first paragraph
3. Bluethooth should be bluetooth
“it really came as no surprise when my wife found a Hello Kitty Bluethooth wireless earphone set:”

fixed — hkh

Comment from christy ann richmond
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:17 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/category/hello-kitty-art/

last paragraph

The deluge of Hello Kitty tattoos into my email box continues unabated (it makes one seriously pause to consider how bad things have become in the world when hundreds of people are not only going under the ink gun to have the evil feline become a part of them, but then think it’s a good idea [...]

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:22 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/12/08/hello-kitty-halloween-costume-vi/
2. Second paragraph, first sentence.
3. occured should be occurred
I took one look at this and thought, “You know, this looks like a torture device that they would use on terrorists to suffocate them into submission” and the minute I did, it occured to me that is exactly what Hello Kitty does…

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:28 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/12/08/hello-kitty-halloween-costume-vi/
2. Second paragraph, second sentence.
3. hallowwen should be Halloween
“combine still getting hallowwen costume photos in December with that and it pretty much sums up Hello Kitty Hell…
hallowwen”

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:46 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/04/hello-kitty-credit-card/

The amount of cash back, what rewards I can receive and what services the credit card provides at not cost

I think you mean at no cost

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:46 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/10/28/hello-kitty-atm-bank/

I no longer even try to explain — when they shoot me that look of “what the hell is this monstrocity?

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:47 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/09/08/hello-kitty-bee-hive/

Your making the bees live in a freaking pink Hello Kitty bee hive and they figured it out.

Your should be You’re

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:47 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/08/04/hello-kitty-brand-scar/
2. First paragraph, second sentence.
3. fo should be of
“You would think that once someone sobered up after getting a Hello Kitty tattoo, they would pretty much have it out fo their system”

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:53 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/02/the-cathood-of-the-travelling-hello-kitty-head/

THis one is kind of nit picky

“Wow, wouldn’t it be great to create something with Hello Kitty like Sisterhood of the travelling Pants?”

Travelling can be spelled with 2 l’s but the title of the movie is only spelled with one

fixed — hkh

Comment from desertbunnee
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:54 pm

page: http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/10/31/hello-kitty-swaroski-1gb-usb-memory-stick/

Title and 1st paragraph

Swaroski should be Swarovski

fixed — hkh

Comment from Jake
Time: November 15, 2009, 12:56 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/02/25/hello-kitty-scion-xb-toyota-car/
2. First paragraph, second sentence.
3. monstrocity should be monstrosity
“A car that has been Hello Kittified from the inside out like this Hello Kitty Scion xB monstrocity:”

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:26 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/12/05/hello-kitty-swarovski-crystal-covered-bike/

second paragraph after the pictures

What’s worse is the Hello Kitty fanatic is totally proud of this monstrocity:

fixed — hkh

monstrocity should be monstrosity

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:26 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/19/hello-kitty-edible-fruit-bouquet/

4th paragraph

which pretty much means I’m going to have to face this monstrocity at some point in the future.

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:26 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/04/22/hello-kitty-washing-machine/

middle of 2nd paragraph

Nobody in their right mind would ever even consider placing a monstrocity like this in their home

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:27 pm

are you noticing a theme in my posts LOL!

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/04/23/hello-kitty-pedicab/

second paragraph

would make amazingly heroic attempts to steer us clear of the monstrocity

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:27 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/05/19/hello-kitty-face-sewing-machine/

3rd paragraph

who really should have to have all her clothes made with this monstrocity

monstrocity should be monstrosity

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:33 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/06/08/hello-kitty-kaleidoscope-projector/

2nd paragraph

My wife doesn’t think this monstrocity should stop here

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:34 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/07/21/hello-kitty-motorcycle-racing-leathers/

second paragraph

who would have to wear this monstrocity must feel

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:34 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/12/11/hello-kitty-computer-case-mod/

4th paragraph

for not only creating this pink monstrocity

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:34 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/01/08/hello-kitty-tram/

5th paragraph

deserves to have to ride that monstrocity

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:43 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/06/08/hello-kitty-camper/

second paragraph

My wife and I had completely different thoughts upon seeing this monstrocity.

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:44 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/07/09/hello-kitty-honda-car/

First paragraph

turn our car into the ultimate Hello Kitty monstrocity,

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:45 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/07/14/hello-kitty-katy-perry-mac-corset/

first paragraph

it’s not really a surprise that this monstrocity

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from candi
Time: November 15, 2009, 1:45 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/02/hello-kitty-paintball-gun/

first paragraph

will carry the shame of owning that monstrocity

monstrocity should be monstrosity

fixed — hkh

Comment from Kisa
Time: November 15, 2009, 2:10 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/01/hello-kitty-laptop-ipod/

down at the bottom “new year” should be “New Year” holiday.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 3:02 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/23/hello-kitty-karaoke-machine/

first sentence…”My wife has managed to already waged an effective assault campaign…”

should be, “My wife has managed to already wage an effective assault campaign…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 3:07 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/26/hello-kitty-hamburger/

last paragraph…”…know eventually where she will be coming out (I’m actually hoping that my wife reads this and decides that I’m never allowed to eat Hello Kitty food again) You have to find a glimmer of hope where ever you can…”

you left the period off the sentence prior to the new sentence beginning with, “You have to find…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 3:13 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/08/29/hello-kitty-boyfriend/

third paragraph…”…so he wouldn’t be ridiculed by all of his co-workers and friend for the rest of his life…”

i’m sure you probably meant it to be plural, “co-workers and friends…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 3:17 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/10/31/hello-kitty-swaroski-computer-mouse/

headline….”Hello Kitty Swaroski Computer Mouse”

you got it right in the body copy, “Hello Kitty Swarovski crystal bead heart shaped mouse…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 3:33 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/25/hello-kitty-sweets-pastry-shop/

third paragraph…”Having been dragged to themed shops like this more than my fair share of times, You quickly learn the types of people that are there.”

the “you” in the middle (after the comma) is unnecessarily capitalized.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 3:37 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/25/hello-kitty-sweets-pastry-shop/

third paragraph, “Obviously, the place is overrunning with Hello Kitty fanatics which can often be worse than the themed store itself.”

should probably be, “Obviously, the place is overrun with Hello Kitty fanatics…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 4:31 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/02/26/hello-kitty-pet-jewelry/

third paragraph, “Hoping again hope that my wife…”

should be, “Hoping against hope that my wife…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 4:38 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/02/21/hello-kitty-piano/

second paragraph…

there’s no punctuation on the last sentence at the end of that paragraph.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 4:41 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/02/21/hello-kitty-piano/

last paragraph…”…who really deserves to to have to play…”

can probably read, “who really deserves to have to play…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 4:47 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/02/20/hello-kitty-vw-bug/

second paragraph…”It will not be long before I’m going to be riding around in something that looks a bad (if not worse — and probably a lot pinker) than this.”

should read, “It will not be long before I’m going to be riding around in something that looks AS bad (if not worse — and probably a lot pinker) than this.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from xio
Time: November 15, 2009, 4:52 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/13/hello-kitty-xmas-hell/

“conversation” paragragraph: please, please, let this be a dream – pinch myself to know that it is reality

should be: “i pinched myself and knew it was a reality”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 15, 2009, 4:54 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/02/01/hello-kitty-ferris-wheel/

second paragraph.

there is no punctuation (a period) separating the first and second sentences of this paragraph.

fixed — hkh

Comment from xio
Time: November 15, 2009, 4:59 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/12/hello-kitty-store-verona-italy/#more-3392

Just another reason that you never want to find yourself living in Hello Kitty Hell…

should be: Just another reason why you would never want to find yourself living in Hello Kitty Hell…

fixed — hkh

Comment from nekopilot02
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:24 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/13/hello-kitty-xmas-tree/

1st paragraph, 2nd sentence:

“No sooner is Halloween” should be “No sooner has Halloween”

Wish me luck! =D

fixed — hkh

Comment from nekopilot02
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:29 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/13/hello-kitty-xmas-tree/

3rd paragraph

1st sentence is a giant run-on sentence

also: neither grammatical or spelling but 2nd paragraph: “nice,” should be “nice”,

fixed — hkh

Comment from nekopilot02
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:31 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/06/25/hello-kitty-lcd-tv/

2nd paragraph

“23 people that” should be “23 people who”

fixed — hkh

Comment from christy ann richmond
Time: November 15, 2009, 6:37 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/category/hello-kitty/page/3/

paragraph 5

This represents a huge dilemma for me. I have no desire to see more Hello Kitty in my daily life than already exist and having my email fill up with [...]

fixed — hkh

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 15, 2009, 7:03 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/18/hello-kitty-assault-rifle-update/

para 3

“Sent in by 27 different readers (including the owner of riflegear), all of who”
should be “all of whom”

nit-picky I know, but you asked.

fixed — hkh

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 15, 2009, 7:08 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/02/free-hello-kitty-toaster/

para 1

“received a email”
should be “an email”

fixed — hkh

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 15, 2009, 7:10 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/02/free-hello-kitty-toaster/

para 5

“exactly all of what was in the package”
“all of” is redundant, could read: “exactly what was in the package”

fixed — hkh

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 15, 2009, 7:18 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/10/04/no-fire-in-hello-kitty-hell/

para 2

“Here answer?”
should be “her answer?”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sylvie
Time: November 15, 2009, 10:59 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/12/05/hello-kitty-maternity-hospital-taiwan/

2nd Paragraph

Capitalization: “Then they go and dress you in hello Kitty as well.”
It should read: “Then they go and dress you in Hello Kitty as well.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sylvie
Time: November 15, 2009, 11:02 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/23/hello-kitty-pierced-navel-rings/

Last paragraph

Too should be to: “a Hello Kitty blanket to look forward too for what I estimate will be a week” should be “a Hello Kitty blanket to look forward to for what I estimate will be a week.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from {tauney}
Time: November 16, 2009, 7:46 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/26/hello-kitty-beauty-pageant/
2. Paragraph 1, sentence 2
3. It’s an absolutely no win situation, fist and foremost, because she will want to have the baby conceived in a Hello Kitty bondage room and delivered in a Hello Kitty maternity ward.

“Fist and foremost” is the problem…more a typo than anything

fixed — hkh

Comment from {tauney}
Time: November 16, 2009, 7:57 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/19/hello-kitty-hello-kitty/#more-3067
2. Paragraph 5

“Unfortunately found on by my wife from miss_island_619 who should have to live with [...]”

Is that supposed to have a URL? Was it found on or by your wife?

fixed — hkh

Comment from kiki
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:06 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/09/30/hello-kitty-fantasic-four-invisible-girl/

Title of the post, “Fantasic” should be “Fantastic.” It is also misspelled in the URL.

fixed — hkh

Comment from kiki
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:10 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/07/28/hello-kitty-wii-dance-pad/

First paragraph, first sentence. In the sentence “set her sites,” “sites” should be “sights.”
“Sites” refers to webpages, “sights” is a visual reference. I’m sure thats what you meant.

fixed — hkh

Comment from kiki
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:15 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/09/27/hello-kitty-bluetooth-wireless-earphones/

First paragraph, first sentence, towards the end of your run-on sentence “bluethooth” should be “bluetooth.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from kiki
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:18 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/18/hello-kitty-shower-radio/

First paragraph, third sentence. You used the word “the” twice: “the the bath area.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from {tauney}
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:30 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/09/22/hello-kitty-face-stickers-for-men/
2. Paragraph 1, sentence 1
3. “Can I just state for the record that I really hate fashion magazines. ”
Needs to be stated as a question.
“Can I just state for the record that I really hate fashion magazines?”

fixed — hkh

Comment from {tauney}
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:45 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/09/07/hello-kitty-toaster/#more-2324
2. Paragraph 4
3. “A warning to all people out there. If your significant other decides that a Hello Kitty toaster is a cute addition to your kitchen, you know that it’s time to get out of the kitchen (and the entire relationship).”

Since the warning follows the first sentence, they should be put together with a colon:

“A warning to all people out there: If your significant other decides that a Hello Kitty toaster is a cute addition to your kitchen, you know that it’s time to get out of the kitchen (and the entire relationship).”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:53 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-hell-the-beginning/

7th paragraph, first sentence.
“So here* I sit…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:53 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/12/17/over-500-hello-kitty-items-gone/

4th paragraph, first sentence.
“I’d just like to take a quick moment to thank everyone who* took…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 16, 2009, 8:58 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/hkh-faqs/

(I can’t figure out the paragraph number.)

“Are their Hello Kitty products that are not worth the time to blog about?”
Should be there*

fixed — hkh

Comment from {tauney}
Time: November 16, 2009, 9:07 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/08/29/hello-kitty-major-league-baseball-punishment/#more-1995
2. Paragraph 3
3. “Of course, it could also be a strategic game winning plan. None of the other players on the other team would be able to concentrate after witnessing something as terrifying as that which would almost assuredly result in the loss of the game.”

Needs a comma, and is a bit of a run-on sentence. Try:

“Of course, it could also be a strategic game-winning plan. None of the players on the other team would be able to concentrate after witnessing something as terrifying as that, which would almost assuredly result in the loss of the game.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from {tauney}
Time: November 16, 2009, 9:13 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/08/27/hello-kitty-spam-sushi/#more-2176
2. Paragraph 2
3. “Next, go get a glass of water and some stomach antacid to try to control the gag reflex and building stomach uneasiness that is automatically started to occur.”

Past/present tense conflict

Try:

“Next, get a glass of water and some antacid to try to control the gag reflex and building stomach uneasiness that has occurred.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 16, 2009, 9:19 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/23/hello-kitty-paris-hilton-three-apples/#more-3189

Second paragraph, fifth sentence.
“In the Hello Kitty fanatics mind,”
Should be fanatics’ mind.

fixed — hkh

Comment from ld
Time: November 16, 2009, 9:42 am

URL: http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/14/with-friends-like-this/

Paragraph 1

Mistake: I took off for the weekend to Las Vegas to meet my business partner, Nate, whom I’ve work on a number of websites with, but had never met before. (should read “…with whom I’ve worked” – splitting the “whom” and “with” would be OK, albeit informal, but the tense of the verb “work” is definitely wrong).

Paragraph 3

Mistake: Actually, it’s pretty much a mute point because there is rarely anything that I ever see that she doesn’t already have. (should read “moot point”)

fixed — hkh

Comment from XeroFaith
Time: November 16, 2009, 10:06 am

URL : http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/free-hello-kitty-optical-mouse-and-mousepad/

Paragraph 8

For every mistake that you find, you get one entry into the contest. You can enter as many times as you like. If you find more than one mistake on a post, be sure to list each one separately as a comment so that you get an entry for each. The more mistakes you point.

You CAN enter should be You MAY enter

fixed — hkh

Comment from {tauney}
Time: November 16, 2009, 11:05 am

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/08/04/hello-kitty-netbook/
2. Paragraph 1
3. “I off-handily mentioned this to my wife who took it upon herself to research and inform me of the Hello Kitty netbooks out there that would be perfect for me and which she wants to buy for me as a gift:”

Should be: “I offhandedly [...]”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 16, 2009, 11:22 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/free-hello-kitty-optical-mouse-and-mousepad

4th paragraph
“she has plenty of both to the point where she has even purchased me one for Xmas in years past”
Should be past years.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Bernardo Pereira
Time: November 16, 2009, 2:21 pm

1. http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/05/hello-kitty-darth-vader/

2. 3rd paragraph

3. “I explained that every Star Wars fan would probably roll over in their grave at the site of this piece of sacrilege if it were true.” – Wouldn’t it be “sight” instead os “site”?

fixed — hkh

Comment from Joan
Time: November 16, 2009, 2:52 pm

1) http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/30/hello-kitty-gas-mask-toxic-shock-tattoo/
2) 3rd paragraph
3) Rollerderby should be roller derby (two words not one)

fixed — hkh

Comment from Joan
Time: November 16, 2009, 2:59 pm

1) http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/07/30/hello-kitty-gold-figures-pendants/
2) 3rd paragraph
3) Repeated the word “the” without comma. (although I think you ment “reading the around the world article”?)

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 17, 2009, 1:42 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/07/08/hello-kitty-whiners/

Third paragraph.
“… a blogger that doesn’t tell your where you can get Hello Kitty…”
Should be ‘you’ and not ‘your’.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Alice
Time: November 17, 2009, 7:45 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/07/14/hello-kitty-tuxedo/

Paragraph 1, 2nd line: “it’s” should be “its”

fixed — hkh

Comment from ld
Time: November 17, 2009, 8:41 am

URL: http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-ferrari/

Paragraph 1

Mistake: One of the things that always happens when people become aware of my Hello Kitty Hell is that the begin to send me photos of all those random and strange Hello Kitty things that are available. (should read “…that they begin to send…”)

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 17, 2009, 9:38 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/10/23/hello-kitty-christmas-lights-candy-rocks/

Third paragraph, in the dialogue.
me: “There Christmas lights…”

Should be “They are Christmas lights…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 17, 2009, 9:40 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/10/08/hello-kitty-glass-slipper/

Second paragraph, last sentence.
“thinking about this combinations gives me”

Should be ‘combination’.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 17, 2009, 9:42 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/09/29/hello-kitty-mineral-water/

Second paragraph.
“is that it’s filled will…”

Should be “filled with”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Cally
Time: November 17, 2009, 9:44 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/09/25/hello-kitty-headphones/

Fifth paragraph.
“to come to terms with awful experience…”

Should be “with the awful experience…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from najenna
Time: November 17, 2009, 12:25 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/21/hello-kitty-extreme-computer-mod/

1st paragraph: “When I get photos like these, I see my future Hello Kitty Hell and that future is not pretty:”

Correction: “When I get photos like these, I see my future Hello Kitty Hell, and that future is not pretty:”

fixed — hkh

Comment from najenna
Time: November 17, 2009, 12:28 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/21/hello-kitty-extreme-computer-mod/

1st paragraph: “While the person that posted the Hello Kitty laptop computer mod had the sense to label it as “hobbies gone wrong” I doubt that any Hello Kitty fanatic would view it that way.”

Correction: “While the person that posted the Hello Kitty laptop computer mod had the sense to label it as “hobbies gone wrong,” I doubt that any Hello Kitty fanatic would view it that way.” (insert comma after “wrong”)

fixed — hkh

Comment from najenna
Time: November 17, 2009, 12:32 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/21/hello-kitty-hat-photo-of-horror-2/

first paragraph: As if the Hello Kitty photo of horror wasn’t enough to show the pain that the significant other of Hello Kitty fanatics must endure (see, if you don’t have a Hello Kitty fanatic in your life, you may have made the terrible assumption that taking a photo like that was reserved for only special times such as a trip to Puroland), here are some more photos sent to me showing how Hello Kitty fanatics are willing to make their husband wear Hello Kitty head gear just because they think it’s “cute”

Correction: As if the Hello Kitty photo of horror wasn’t enough to show the pain that the significant other of Hello Kitty fanatics must endure (see, if you don’t have a Hello Kitty fanatic in your life, you may have made the terrible assumption that taking a photo like that was reserved for only special times such as a trip to Puroland), here are some more photos sent to me showing how Hello Kitty fanatics are willing to make their husbands wear Hello Kitty head gear just because they think it’s “cute.” (pluralize “husband” and add a period after “cute”)

fixed — hkh

Comment from najenna
Time: November 17, 2009, 12:36 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/21/hello-kitty-hat-photo-of-horror-2/

2nd paragraph: This look of terror is “cute’ in The Hello Kitty fanatic’s eyes and they somehow convince themselves that he is actually enjoying himself.

Correction: This look of terror is “cute’ in The Hello Kitty fanatic’s eyes, and they somehow convince themselves that he is actually enjoying himself. (insert comma after “eyes”)

fixed — hkh

Comment from najenna
Time: November 17, 2009, 12:39 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/21/hello-kitty-hat-photo-of-horror-2/

3rd paragraph: Worse, my wife then wants to know why I am not willing to do such things when other husbands will which ultimately leads to my wife attempting to do so and me eventually spending the night on the couch in the Hello Kitty sleeping bag.

Correction: Worse, my wife then wants to know why I am not willing to do such things when other husbands will. This ultimately leads to my wife attempting to do so and me eventually spending the night on the couch in the Hello Kitty sleeping bag. (Split the run-on sentence)

fixed — hkh

Comment from najenna
Time: November 17, 2009, 12:42 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/01/21/hello-kitty-hat-photo-of-horror-2/

4th paragraph: Actually posting these photos was quite a dilemma. To do so is instant humiliation for the poor guy and I know that he will not be able to leave his home for the next month due to embarrassment, but at the same time, nobody would believe this actually takes place if I don’t (seriously, would anyone in their right mind think that dressing a man in a Hello Kitty hat would be a positive event in any way, shape or form and that people actually do it without photo proof?). I do need to send out a big “thank you” to him for taking another one for the Hello Kitty Hell team…

Correction: To do so is instant humiliation for the poor guy, and I know that he will not be able to leave his home for the next month due to embarrassment. At the same time, nobody would believe this actually takes place if I don’t (seriously, would anyone in their right mind think that dressing a man in a Hello Kitty hat would be a positive event in any way, shape or form and that people actually do it without photo proof?). (insert comma after “guy” and split run-on sentence)

fixed — hkh

Comment from najenna
Time: November 17, 2009, 12:45 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/01/20/hello-kitty-mac-cosmetics/

1st paragraph: For anyone that doesn’t know, MAC is coming out with a line if Hello Kitty cosmetics:

Correction: For anyone that doesn’t know, MAC is coming out with a line of Hello Kitty cosmetics: (change “if” to “of”)

fixed — hkh

Comment from shuzluva
Time: November 17, 2009, 12:59 pm

Page: http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/17/hello-kitty-punisher-tattoo/

3rd paragraph: I immediately reminded her in detail about her fear of needles and how painful getting a tattoo would.

Correction: I immediately reminded her in detail about her fear of needles and how painful getting a tattoo would be.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 17, 2009, 1:12 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/05/23/hello-kitty-dog-hip-dysplasia-orthopedic-brace/

first paragraph…”When you old and you can no longer walk on your own…”

should be, “…when you’re old…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Kayte
Time: November 17, 2009, 1:13 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/11/15/hello-kitty-tattoo-heart/

The mistake is in the second paragraph. “The worst is that since he’s a guy he probably has know idea that he didn’t put Hello Kitty on his arm…” It should read “…he probably has no idea…”
Woo, grammar and Kitty, my favourite things ^-^

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 17, 2009, 1:17 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/05/19/hello-kitty-politics-credit-card/

second paragraph…”They know that while normal people will look at this and shake their head is disbelief…”

should be, “They know that while normal people will look at this and shake their head IN disbelief…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 17, 2009, 1:20 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/05/19/hello-kitty-politics-credit-card/

second paragraph, “…Hello Kitty fanatics will only have frozen smiles on the faces of as drool seeps out the side of their mouths…”

should be, “…Hello Kitty fanatics will only have frozen smiles on their faces as drool seeps out the side of their mouths…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 17, 2009, 1:35 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/08/23/hello-kitty-crocs/

third paragraph, “Trying to explain that it’s taken far less that a grown man wearing pink crocs…

awkward phrasing, but aside from that, it should probably read, “Trying to explain that it’s taken far less THAN a grown man wearing pink crocs…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Tyra Odabashian
Time: November 17, 2009, 1:43 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/01/17/creepy-hello-kitty-lisa-loeb-video/

third paragraph, “I suppose this would be every Hello Kitty fanatics fantasy…”

should be, “I suppose this would be every Hello Kitty fanatic’s fantasy…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from mhkitty
Time: November 17, 2009, 1:43 pm

Man, you just opened the floodgates of hell upon yourself! Only thing worse than a crazed hello kitty fan is a crazed hello kitty fan who thinks they know it all about grammar and spelling!

I’d say good luck but this was your own fault, man!

point well taken — hkh

Comment from Joan
Time: November 17, 2009, 2:20 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/02/hello-kitty-paintball-gun/

1st paragraph: The irony, of course, is that the loser will go home having lost happily knowing that he doesn’t have to live life with a Hello Kitty paintball gun.

There should be a comma in between lost and happily.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Joan
Time: November 17, 2009, 2:22 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/30/hello-kitty-radio-controlled-truck/
1st P:
I’m not sure what is more disturbing — the fact that they actually make a Hello Kitty radio controlled truck

It should be radio-controlled.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Joan
Time: November 17, 2009, 2:27 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/23/hello-kitty-crystal-music-player/

1st P: It’s not like the world needs another Hello Kitty digital music player, but just because something is not needed has never stopped the evil feline from selling it.

It should be “just because something is not needed doesn’t mean the evil feline won’t sell it.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Joan
Time: November 17, 2009, 2:28 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/23/hello-kitty-crystal-music-player/
1st P:
— lots and lots of bling by covering the digital music player with Swarovski crystals.

The preposition by should be replaced with “from”.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Joan
Time: November 17, 2009, 2:29 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/23/hello-kitty-crystal-music-player/

1st P: Not only does this keep the fanatic happy, it blinds everyone else to the evil that is coming…

With the “Not only” you need to have “but also” after the comma.

fixed — hkh

Comment from Natalock
Time: November 17, 2009, 3:46 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/16/it-aint-going-to-happen/

1st paragraph

“All your pleading, whining and crying have absolutely no affect on me because basically, I don’t care.”

- ‘affect’ should be ‘effect’

fixed — hkh

Comment from franchesca
Time: November 17, 2009, 4:16 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/17/hello-kitty-punisher-tattoo/

2nd paragraph below the pic:

The sentence says: I immediately reminded her in detail about her fear of needles and how painful getting a tattoo would.

It should say: I immediately reminded her in detail about her fear of needles and how painful getting a tattoo would be.

fixed — hkh

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 17, 2009, 9:10 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/17/hello-kitty-punisher-tattoo/

1st para, last line

“…things can always get worse and this matching…”
missing comma
should read: “…things can always get worse, and this matching…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 17, 2009, 9:12 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/17/hello-kitty-punisher-tattoo/

4th para

“…could imagine doing since one day…”
missing comma
should read: “…could imagine doing, since one day…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from Sharon
Time: November 18, 2009, 9:30 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/17/hello-kitty-punisher-tattoo/#more-3699

3 rd paragraph

“I immediately reminded her in detail about her fear of needles and how painful getting a tattoo would.” should be “I immediately reminded her in detail about her fear of needles and how painful getting a tattoo would be.”

If chosen I solemnly swear to smash it to smithereens and show you the result.

Comment from Cally
Time: November 18, 2009, 10:56 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/08/free-hello-kitty-vibrator/#more-3471

7th paragraph.
“If you are interested in the pink should massager…”

Should be ’shoulder’.

Comment from Gloria
Time: November 18, 2009, 1:06 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/18/hello-kitty-fanatic-significant-other-photo/

3rd paragraph

It doesn’t take long for you to realise that the “innocent” photo that you took was in reality the confirming fact that you are living in Hello Kitty Hell

should say “realize” not “realise”

Comment from Kelly
Time: November 18, 2009, 10:22 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/10/15/hello-kitty-debit-card/

4th paragraph, under Update:

“…far to many readers decided to send me these patterns…”

“to” should be “too.”

Comment from Kelly
Time: November 18, 2009, 10:51 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/05/26/hello-kitty-skin-meter/

3rd paragraph.

“… it appears that at least one employee had a twinge of conscience and added a clock in it (the call the gadget a “Hello Kitty beauty clock”) so that it actually has a function that makes sense to anyone that isn’t a Hello Kitty fanatic.”

Fragment in parentheses doesn’t make sense. Also, “makes sense to anyone that” should be “makes sense to anyone who.”

Are you sure this contest is a good idea? Having to go back through every hellish encounter can’t be good for your health.

Comment from Sheena
Time: November 18, 2009, 11:19 pm

hahahahahah too much time or effort for a mouse pad ridiculous

Comment from Timbrely
Time: November 19, 2009, 6:34 am

I love this idea for cleaning up your blog. Clever man. (or a glutton for abuse)

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-hell-the-beginning/
Paragraph 1
“I live in a Hello Kitty Hell, no if ands or buts about it.” should read
“I live in a Hello Kitty Hell, no ifs, ands or buts about it.” with one more ’s’ and one more comma. (I believe a comma after “ands” is optional… and honestly, I don’t know if it is “Hell,” or some other punctuation mark.)

Please randomizer, pick me!

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:03 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/25/hello-kitty-nightmare-becoming-reality/

“(applesauce would be quite appropriate where cuteness (in their distorted vision) ”

Weird parenthetical error with a winking emoticon (intentional?) in the middle.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:10 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/22/hello-kitty-proof/

“…nobody could ever be that creative (or more appropriately, demented) to make up something like this.”

Grammatically incorrect. Should read:
“nobody could ever be creative (or more appropriately, demented) enough to make up something like this.”

The first one doesn’t make sense.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:12 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/22/hello-kitty-proof/

“There are some things that are just to cruel to contemplate.”

Improper form: should be “too cruel” instead of “to cruel.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:14 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/22/hello-kitty-proof/

“…(I hope that this was to get some type of demented pleasure at my expense and not the desire to imitate my wife) This is another one of those Catch 22 situations.”

Missing punctuation: should be a period after parenthetical close.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:19 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/17/i-know-more-about-hello-kitty-than-is-healthy/

“While a lot of people assume that Hello Kitty was born in Tokyo, Japan, she was really born in London England…”

Missing punctuation: should be a comma between “London” and “England.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:21 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/17/i-know-more-about-hello-kitty-than-is-healthy/

“…and much more that if I continued on here, I’d really get depressed and slit my wrists…”

Should read, “and SO much more that…,” in order for the sentence to make sense.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:23 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/17/i-know-more-about-hello-kitty-than-is-healthy/

“The worst part of having this Hello Kitty knowledge is when my friends learn about it and then abuse it. we will be at a gathering of some type…”

Capitalization error: the word “we” should be capitalized.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:26 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/17/i-know-more-about-hello-kitty-than-is-healthy/

4th paragraph

“…a lot of people I don’t know and start talking about Hello Kitty and making false statements on purpose knowing that I will have to correct them.”

Missing word:

Should read: “…a lot of people I don’t know and THEY’LL start talking about Hello Kitty and making false statements on purpose knowing that I will have to correct them.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:34 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/10/hello-kitty-band-aids/

2nd Paragraph

“…with a strange look that she obviously thought I was some kind of psycho.”

Missing word,
Should read: “…with SUCH a strange look that she obviously thought I was some kind of psycho.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:38 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-ferrari/

1st paragraph

“is that the begin to send me photos”

Should be “they” instead of “the”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:41 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/04/hello-kitty-hell-the-beginning/

1st paragraph

“no if ands or buts about it”

Should read: “no ifs, ands, or buts about it”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:46 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/29/never-ask-a-hello-kitty-lover-to-shop-for-you/

2nd paragraph

The problem comes when a birthday or other gift giving even approaches.”

Should be “event,” not “even.” The ‘t’ is missing.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:48 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/29/never-ask-a-hello-kitty-lover-to-shop-for-you/

3rd paragraph:

“Never underestimate the ever presence of Hello Kitty Hell.”

Doesn’t make sense. Should be reworded, ie: “Never underestimate the ever-present Hello Kitty Hell”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:52 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/25/how-hello-kitty-is-ruining-my-love-life/

3rd paragraph below photo

“(all single guys, write than down in your notebook).”

Should be “that” instead of “than.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:55 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/25/how-hello-kitty-is-ruining-my-love-life/

Located in conversation below the photograph:

“(Hello Kitty sleeping bag is thrown on couch bedroom doorslammed and locked)”

Should read: “(Hello Kitty sleeping bag is thrown on couch, bedroom door slammed and locked)”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:57 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/23/hello-kitty-travel/

1st paragraph

“There minds get so obsessed with Hello Kitty…”

Improper form: should be “their” instead of “there.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:01 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/23/hello-kitty-travel/

2nd paragraph

“One thing that I treasure are trips.”

Improper subject/verb agreement. Should read: “One thing that I treasure IS trips.”

“Trips” in this case is not the subject, it is the object. The subject is “thing.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:06 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/20/hello-kitty-scooter/

Last paragraph, below photos”

“Once my wife realized that there were multiple Hello Kitty scooter styles out there, it’s inevitable that she would want to begin a collection…”

Tense change: Should read, “Once my wife realized that there were multiple Hello Kitty scooter styles out there, it WAS inevitable that she would want to begin a collection…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:08 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/20/hello-kitty-scooter/

Last paragraph, at the end:

“It’s not even reality att his time…”

Should say, “at this time.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:14 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/05/my-biggest-fear/

4th paragraph

“…I would truly be scared to return home to see what new might be there.”

This doesn’t make sense. Maybe it could say “what new HORRORS might be there.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:16 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/05/my-biggest-fear/

5th paragraph

“So in the future you hear that someone has won the lottery…”

Should say, “So IF in the future…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:21 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/10/27/hello-kitty-dvd-nightmare/

3rd paragraph

“While living in Japan I made the mistake mentioning that…”

Should say, “made the mistake OF mentioning…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:26 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/10/19/hello-kitty-crop-circle/

Last paragraph

“…which appears to heated the temperature in my Hello Kitty Hell.”

Missing word. Should say, “which appears to HAVE heated…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:29 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/10/08/sanrio-fembot-loves-hello-kitty/

Last paragraph

“The only positive I can say… ”

Missing word: Should read, “The only positive THING I can say…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:33 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/10/05/hell-kitty-boxers/

Last paragraph, below pictures

“which once again brings me too the Hello Kitty Hell catch 22.”

Improper form: should be “to,” not “too.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:39 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/16/hello-kitty-sewing-machine/

1st paragraph

“every Hello Kitty items”

“Item” should be singular.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:41 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/16/hello-kitty-sewing-machine/

paragraph below pictures

“The part that she loves (and send shivers down my spine)…”

Should be “sends,” not “send.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:42 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/16/hello-kitty-sewing-machine/

Paragraph below pictures

“It’s start slowly with…”

Should be “It will,” or “It’s going to.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:45 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/13/hello-kitty-xmas-hell/

1st paragraph

“…when it comes delaying anything Hellish.”

Missing word: should be, “when it comes TO delaying…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:48 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/08/hello-kitty-mask/

2nd paragraph

“tipped-toed”

Should be “tip-toed”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:50 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/11/02/hello-kitty-tombstone/

1st paragraph (below photo)

“At first I chuckled to myself and that this was extreme…”

Missing word: should say, “At first I chuckled to myself and THOUGHT that this was extreme…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:54 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/30/hello-kitty-sake-rice-wine/

Above and below image of sake bottle: Â

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 10:57 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/30/hello-kitty-sake-rice-wine/

Last paragraph

“…and a reminder that yet another year of Hello Kitty Hell just around the corner…”

Missing word: “…Hello Kitty Hell IS just around the corner…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:00 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/19/hello-kitty-yarn/

Last paragraph

“…not to distant future…”

Should be “too,” not “to.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:03 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/02/164-million-platinum-hello-kitty-figure/

1st paragraph

“…by far worry me the most and you know…”

Missing comma: should be, “…by far worries me the most, and you know…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:04 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/02/164-million-platinum-hello-kitty-figure/

1st paragraph

“This is that award goes to…”

Should be simply, “That award goes to…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:07 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/01/hello-kitty-laptop-ipod/

1st paragraph

“See the problem is that this special offering is being limited to just 100 units so she is convinced that she will be able to resell them for a big profit.”

Missing commas. Should read, “See, the problem is that this special offering is being limited to just 100 units, so she is convinced that she will be able to resell them for a big profit.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:08 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/12/01/hello-kitty-laptop-ipod/

1st paragraph

“The price also isn’t much of a deal with the pair selling for 248,000 yen (approx. $2100).”

Missing comma:
“The price also isn’t much of a deal, with the pair selling for 248,000 yen (approx. $2100).”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:12 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/31/hello-kitty-tooth-cap/

Below picture

“That being said, I do have a great fear with Hello Kitty and teeth and I’m not sure that I should even mention it…”

Correct:
“That being said, I do have a great fear OF Hello Kitty and teeth, and I’m not sure that I should even mention…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:15 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/31/hello-kitty-tooth-cap/

Last paragraph
“…someone with Hello Kitty in diamonds implanted into their front teeth…”

Correction: “…someone with Hello Kitty in diamonds implanted into HIS or HER front teeth…”

“Their” is plural, and “Someone” is singular, so you have to change “their” to “his” or “her.” Common error.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:17 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/30/hello-kitty-apple-tv/

2nd paragraph

“…Hello Kitty TV and so it was with much fear that I opened up an email…”

Missing comma:
“…Hello Kitty TV, and so it was with much fear that I opened up an email…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:17 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/30/hello-kitty-apple-tv/

1st paragraph

“ojuang” should be capitalized.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:19 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/30/hello-kitty-apple-tv/

1st paragraph

“…high end of my sick factor scale which immediately meant my wife would love it.”

Missing comma:
“…high end of my sick factor scale, which immediately meant my wife would love it.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:20 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/30/hello-kitty-apple-tv/

3rd paragraph

“…mention of “one in every room” which immediately stopped my heart.”

Missing comma:
“…mention of “one in every room,” which immediately stopped my heart.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:21 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/30/hello-kitty-apple-tv/

Last sentence

“Thanks (I think) to ojuang”

Capitalization! “Ojuang”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:24 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/29/hello-kitty-steering-wheel-cover/

3rd paragraph (below photos)

“…feathers all around the the Hello Kitty computer.”

Should be “…LIKE the Hello Kitty computer.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:32 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/28/hello-kitty-an-pan/

2nd paragraph

“…”an” is a sickly sweet black bean paste often used in Japanese deserts…”

Should be “desserts,” not “deserts.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:35 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/28/hello-kitty-an-pan/

2nd paragraph

“…and while it seems apply appropriate as something that should…”

“Apply” is not the appropriate word here. Maybe “amply” or “aptly.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:37 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/28/hello-kitty-an-pan/

Last paragraph

“…actually be worthwhile eating and drinking like Hello Kitty pizza and Hello Kitty beer?”

Should be, “…actually be worthwhile TO EAT AND DRINK, like Hello Kitty pizza and Hello Kitty beer?”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:41 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/27/hello-kitty-condom/

3rd paragraph

“I have heard rumors that there are Hello Kitty condoms although I had never seen any in person”

Mixed tenses, should be: “I HAD heard rumors that there are Hello Kitty condoms although I had never seen any in person”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:42 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/27/hello-kitty-condom/

4th paragraph

“What it actually turned out to be is Hello Kitty cheese.”

Should be, “What it actually turned out to be WAS Hello Kitty cheese.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:45 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/27/hello-kitty-baby-car-seat/

Final sentence

“You know you’re in Hello Kitty Hell when your only hope is if they come out with Hello Kitty birth control…”

Should be: “You know you’re in Hello Kitty Hell when your only hope is THAT they come out with Hello Kitty birth control…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:47 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/26/hello-kitty-bathroom/

First paragraph

“…whether I am making all of this up and have asked to see photos of our house…”

Missing comma
“…whether I am making all of this up, and have asked to see photos of our house…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:50 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/26/hello-kitty-bathroom/

2nd paragraph below photos

“…but if it is one thing I’ve learned about Hello Kitty fanatics…”

Should be, “…but if THERE is one thing I’ve learned about Hello Kitty fanatics…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:52 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/25/hello-kitty-gun/

2nd paragraph

“The Hello Kitty item in question is a Hello Kitty gun which sent to me by readers Mackenzie and Dolores.”

Should be, “The Hello Kitty item in question is a Hello Kitty gun which WAS sent to me by readers Mackenzie and Dolores.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:53 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/25/hello-kitty-gun/

Immediately below conversation

“It was at this point that I was glad that she didn’t have the Hello Kitty gun as it would have probably been used on me…”

Missing comma
“It was at this point that I was glad that she didn’t have the Hello Kitty gun, as it would have probably been used on me…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:54 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/25/hello-kitty-gun/

Last paragraph

“…with the historic even…”

Should be “event,” not “even.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 11:59 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/24/hello-kitty-cereal-fruit-flavored-snacks/

In conversation
“me: (eyes popping out of head in shear terror)”

Should be “sheer,” not “shear.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:00 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/24/hello-kitty-cereal-fruit-flavored-snacks/

In conversation

“…she had be hounding on me for months…”

Should be “been,” not “be.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:01 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/24/hello-kitty-cereal-fruit-flavored-snacks/

Last paragraph

“…in the future. then it is only…”

“Then” should be capitalized.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:03 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/23/hello-kitty-snowman/

1st paragraph, below photo

“…I consider to pass an afternoon…”

Improper grammar. Should be,
“…I consider passing an afternoon…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:07 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/22/hello-kitty-venus/

Below photo

“wife: “Wouldn’t look just perfect in our entry way?””

Missing word, should be:
“wife: “Wouldn’t IT look just perfect in our entry way?””

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:09 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/22/hello-kitty-venus/

Last sentence

“Luckily me wife wasn’t in the room…”

Should be “my” not “me”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:11 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/21/hello-kitty-extreme-computer-mod/

Below photos

“…to label it as “hobbies gone wrong” I doubt that any Hello Kitty fanatic…”

missing comma after “wrong.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:15 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/18/hello-kitty-bathroom-slippers/

Above and below photos there is this symbol: Â

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:17 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/16/hello-kitty-how-many-bows/

The  symbol is above and below the photos again

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:20 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/16/hello-kitty-pop-tarts/

 THIS THING AGAIN!

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:23 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/01/14/hello-kitty-luggage/

“I can’t think of anything less embarrassing than walking through a crowded airport dragging a Hello Kitty suitcase behind me…”

Should be “MORE embarrassing,” according to the context.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:25 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/27/hello-kitty-menstrual-pantie-liners/

“pantie”

It’s “panty,” not “pantie.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:26 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/26/hello-kitty-thermometer/

First paragraph

“…have on pink Hello Kitty foot warmers on my feet…”

Should be, “…have pink Hello Kitty foot warmers on my feet…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:31 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/18/hello-kitty-shower-radio/

First paragraph

“I can tell you that nothing quite sums up Hello Kitty Hell as having to listen…”

Should be, “LIKE having to listen…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:39 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/17/hello-kitty-martini/

Last sentence
“Add all the above ingredients into a martini glass pouring over crushed ice.”

should be, “Add all the above ingredients into a martini glass, THEN POUR over crushed ice.”

Comment from JL
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:40 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2009/11/14/free-hello-kitty-optical-mouse-and-mousepad/

8th paragraph (depending on how you count lists…)

“get the next inexplicable Hello Kittified item up” Oh no! It appears that you have ended this parenthetical phrase with a preposition! I think it should be “get UP the next inexplicable Hello Kittified item”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:42 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/16/it-aint-going-to-happen/

First paragraph

“…kind of like Hello Kitty Hell in reverse and it almost seems poetic in justice…”

Missing comma, should be, “…kind of like Hello Kitty Hell in reverse, and it almost seems poetic in justice…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:43 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/16/it-aint-going-to-happen/

2nd paragraph

“…searching, looking or even telling you…”

Should be, “…searching, looking FOR, or even telling you…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:48 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/15/hello-kitty-exercise-ball/

Last paragraph

“The minute I saw that I realized that exercise equipment…”

Missing comma, should be “The minute I saw that, I realized…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:50 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/14/hello-kitty-snowman-mail-delivered/

First paragraph

“Awhile back I wrote…”

Improper form, should be “A while,” not “awhile.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:52 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/14/hello-kitty-snowman-mail-delivered/

2nd paragraph

“…refrigerated mail service truck (so it doesn’t melt along the way) and display it for all to see.”

Missing comma, should be,

“…refrigerated mail service truck (so it doesn’t melt along the way), and display it for all to see.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:54 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/13/hello-kitty-microwave/

First paragraph, “weaved” should be “woven.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 12:57 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/12/hello-kitty-yogurt-maker/

First paragraph

“…both sides of the issue. my wife continues to hint…”

“My” should be capitalized.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 1:00 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/09/hello-kitty-toilet-paper/

First paragraph

“…that is the end of the issue, but I knew that things…”

This is a run-on sentence. There should be a period after “issue,” and “but” should be omitted, thus beginning the following sentence with “I.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 1:02 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/09/hello-kitty-toilet-paper/

2nd paragraph

“…but have to face the Hello Kitty Hell wrath of actually using a Hello Kitty product the way it was supposed to be used.”

Should be, “…but have to face the Hello Kitty Hell wrath FOR actually using a Hello Kitty product the way it was supposed to be used.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 1:05 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/09/hello-kitty-toilet-paper/

In the conversation

“…I accidentally bumped the shelf and they fell down and I just place them back up…”

“Place” should be “placed.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 2:28 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/07/hello-kitty-binoculars/

First paragraph

“That means that id a company makes it, there is probably a Hello Kitty model out there.”

Should be “if” not “id.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 2:30 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/07/hello-kitty-binoculars/

Last paragraph

“…it isn’t going to be a pretty sight and never fun to bring Hello Kitty Hell into the public arena…”

Should be, “…it isn’t going to be a pretty sight and IT IS never fun to bring Hello Kitty Hell into the public arena…”

fixed — hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 2:34 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/05/hello-kitty-night-light/

First paragraph

“…whenever I happen by just to let me know who is in charge.”

Missing comma,
“…whenever I happen by, just to let me know who is in charge.”

fixed — hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 2:37 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/04/hello-kitty-toaster-oven/

First paragraph

“…cooking utensils including out Hello Kitty toaster oven…”

“Out” should be “our.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 2:40 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/04/hello-kitty-toaster-oven/

Last paragraph

“…it up all over the table which would happen if I had to look at Hello Kitty actually on my toast…”

Missing comma, should be: “…it up all over the table, which would happen if I had to look at Hello Kitty actually on my toast…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 2:48 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/03/hello-kitty-usb-computer-keyboard-cleaner/

First paragraph

“…would anyone in their right mind (I think we have already established that Hello Kitty fanatics fall outside these parameters) really need a Hello Kitty USB computer keyboard cleaner with two different cleaning heads.”

This sentence should end with a question mark.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 2:53 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/02/hello-kitty-car-lights/

First paragraph

“It would not surprise me in the least bit to find that somewhere, someone selling a Hello Kitty modified engine.”

Should be,
“It would not surprise me in the least bit to find that somewhere, someone IS selling a Hello Kitty modified engine.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 3:01 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/01/hello-kitty-cds/

First paragraph

“…thus the mind works of the Hello Kitty fanatics the around the world…”

Should be …thusly the mind…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 3:25 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/02/01/hello-kitty-cds/

Below the photo

“It doesn’t matter that the SD looks like any other CD once the packaging comes off.”

Should be, “It doesn’t matter that the CD looks like any other CD once the packaging comes off.”

Comment from Alice
Time: November 19, 2009, 6:34 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/08/08/hello-kitty-business-card-case/

4th parapgraph from top: “forshadows” should be “foreshadows”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 6:54 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/23/hello-kitty-karaoke-machine/

2nd paragraph (below photos)

“I have decided that for my own sanity that I won’t even attempt…”

The second “that” should be omitted.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 7:01 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/21/hello-kitty-diamond-ring-neiman-marcus/

2nd paragraph (below photo)

“Hello Kitty fanatics don’t worry about little thinks like…”

“Thinks” should be “things.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 7:04 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/21/hello-kitty-diamond-ring-neiman-marcus/

3rd paragraph

“…but it would mean mean $4,250 worth of…”

One “mean” too many.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 7:06 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/21/hello-kitty-diamond-ring-neiman-marcus/

3rd paragraph

“…other Hello Kitty junk that never make it into our house…”

“Make” should be “makes.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 7:09 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/21/hello-kitty-stamps-used/

First paragraph

“One of the biggest problems living in Hello Kitty Hell…”

Should be, “One of the biggest problems WITH living in Hello Kitty Hell “

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 7:52 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/09/hello-kitty-official-pantie-liners/

1st paragraph

“…stumbles across this….”we can fly over on the Hello Kitty airline…”

“We” should be capitalized.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 7:55 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/06/hello-kitty-tv-3-4/

1st paragraph

“…that two different TV Hello Kitty TV set models…”

The first “TV” should be omitted.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 7:57 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/03/06/hello-kitty-tv-3-4/
1st paragraph

“I guess it really shouldn’t come as a surprise that two different TV Hello Kitty TV set models would be enough…”

Should be “WOULDN’T be enough,” as this post is regarding models 3 and 4.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 19, 2009, 8:05 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/29/hello-kitty-mannequin/

2nd paragraph

“It seems like there some that would like to see Hello Kitty…”

should be, “It seems like there ARE some that would like to see Hello Kitty…”

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:02 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/12/29/hello-kitty-for-men/

1st para

“I’m fully aware that they exist and (unfortunately), I have for a few months now:”

insert ‘been’ and move comma
should read: “I’m fully aware that they exist, and (unfortunately) I have been for a few months now:”

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:06 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/05/02/hello-kitty-forehead-tattoo-old/

1st para

“getting on right smack”

should read: “getting one right smack”

Comment from teleuteskitty
Time: November 19, 2009, 9:08 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2008/05/02/hello-kitty-forehead-tattoo-old/

3rd para

“for every thinking”

should read: “for ever thinking”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 6:27 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/29/hello-kitty-mannequin/

Below photo
“…to see Hello Kitty turn into a real life being…”

Correct usage is “real LIVE being…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 6:36 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/24/hello-kitty-computer-keyboard/

2nd paragraph

“…Which all points tho Hello Kitty Hell…”

“tho” should be “to”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 6:39 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/22/hello-kitty-guitar-picks/

2nd paragraph (below photos)

“…pain with each and every Hello Kitty purchases…”

“Purchases” should be singularly, “purchase.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 6:41 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/22/hello-kitty-guitar-picks/

Last sentence

“…all of who should have to listen…”

Should be “whom,” not “who.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 6:50 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/15/hello-kitty-electric-guitar-amplifier/

1st paragraph

“I’ve already mentioned that she doesn’t play, nor have any plans to learn to play…”

“Have” should be “has.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 6:58 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/12/hello-kitty-scarecrow/

1st paragraph

“Hello Kitty fanatics take it a level beyond what is normal.”

Should be, “Hello Kitty fanatics take it TO a level beyond what is normal.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 6:59 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/12/hello-kitty-scarecrow/

1st paragraph

“then again, this is seems to be the normal daily operation of Hello Kitty Hell”

The word “is” should be omitted.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:05 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/11/hello-kitty-bento/

2nd paragraph, (below photos)

“…it’s a good idea to go down into the basement and the feeling you get when she/he opens the basement door…”

Run on. Should be: “…it’s a good idea to go down into the basement, and the feeling you get when she/he opens the basement door…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:07 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/10/hello-kitty-food-stamp/

1st paragraph

“Now not only can my wife search for all the Hello Kitty branded food out there to torture me with, if for some reason she’s in a hurry or can’t find a particular food that comes with Hello Kitty, she can simply brand it with a Hello Kitty stamp.”

Needs a coordinating conjunction before conjunction “if.” Should read, “BUT if for some reason…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:08 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/10/hello-kitty-food-stamp/

Last paragraph

“…he is also slowly moving her ways through…”

“Ways” should be “way.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:11 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/08/hello-kitty-bicycle-tire/

In paragraph below photo of bicycle

“She always takes it a step further placing her face…”

Should read, “…BY placing her face…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:11 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/08/hello-kitty-bicycle-tire/

In paragraph below photo of bicycle

“…that make your stop and wonder…”

“Your” should be “you.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:13 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/08/hello-kitty-bicycle-tire/

In paragraph below photo of bicycle tire

“Then it dawns on you that they person who thought of that…”

“They” should be “the.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:15 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/08/hello-kitty-bicycle-tire/

Last paragraph

“…when it’s a guy, as as in this case with zbicyclist, sends me…”

The word “it’s” should be omitted.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:26 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/05/hello-kitty-ipod-car-charger-fm-transmitter/

2nd paragraph

“…but even a bigger fear is…”

Should read, “…but an even bigger fear…,” to be grammatically correct.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:28 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/05/hello-kitty-ipod-car-charger-fm-transmitter/

Last paragraph

“…Hello Kitty car. ‘nough said…”

Capitalize “‘Nough.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 7:31 am

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/04/hello-kitty-noodles/

Last paragraph

“Typically Hello Kitty Hell.”

“Typically” should be “typical.”

Comment from ld
Time: November 20, 2009, 2:04 pm

URL: http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/22/hello-kitty-proof/

Paragraph 2

Mistake: “I’m sure the inmates would be able to successfully fight it in court, however, as cruel and unusual punishment” (Sentence should end with a period.)

Comment from ld
Time: November 20, 2009, 2:06 pm

Comment from ld
Time: November 20, 2009, 2:04 pm

URL: http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/08/22/hello-kitty-proof/

Paragraph 3

Mistake: “In relation to providing proof, Emily also asked if my wife had a website (I hope that this was to get some type of demented pleasure at my expense and not the desire to imitate my wife)” (Sentence should end with a period.)

Comment from ld
Time: November 20, 2009, 2:10 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/29/never-ask-a-hello-kitty-lover-to-shop-for-you/

Paragraph 7

Mistake: “So my computer, which I have so diligently protected from Hello Kitty Hell, now has a Hello Kitty memory stick invading it’s USB port and likely will for the foreseeable future.” (should be its USB port)

Comment from ld
Time: November 20, 2009, 2:12 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/23/hello-kitty-travel/

Paragraph 1

Mistake: “There minds get so obsessed with Hello Kitty that the main object of anything suggested gets turned around from what has been suggested to Hello Kitty.” (should be “Their minds”)

Comment from ld
Time: November 20, 2009, 2:13 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2006/09/23/hello-kitty-travel/

Paragraph 1

Mistake: “So our next overseas trip has been delegated to EVA air and where ever their Hello Kitty airplane goes.” (should read wherever”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 2:56 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/02/hello-kitty-stone-statue/

2nd paragraph

“I guess that would be the case is we wanted our house value…”

The word “is” should be “if.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 2:59 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/02/hello-kitty-blow-light-update/

2nd paragraph below photo

‘blow light”

Should be ‘blow light’ or “blow light.” The quotations are mismatched.

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:03 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/01/hello-kitty-blow-light/

3rd paragraph

“The direction of use are printed on the back…”

Should be, “The direction of use IS printed on the back,” OR “The DIRECTIONS of use are printed on the back.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:04 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/04/01/hello-kitty-blow-light/

Last paragraph

“Only in Japan would come up with something Hello Kitty like this…”

Should be, “Only in Japan would THEY come up with something Hello Kitty like this…”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:13 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/05/27/hello-kitty-piano-roll-up-style/

“While any normal person would take one look at that and simple say…”

“Simple” should be “simply.”

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:17 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/05/25/hello-kitty-floor-buffer/

2nd Paragraph

“Why on earth would I ever let me wife know…”

“Me” should be “my.”

fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:23 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/05/18/hello-kitty-nails/

2nd paragraph

“…bet you don’t want to even imagine something like that horrifying…”

The word “like” should be omitted.”
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:27 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/05/13/hello-kitty-vibrator-tattoo-gun/

Penultimate paragraph

“…used with permission I think I have figured out a way to keep my wife from getting that…”

Should be a period after “permission.”
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:31 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/05/08/hello-kitty-vibrator/

1st paragraph

“Yes, my wife does have a Hello Kitty should massager….”
“Should” should be “shoulder.”
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:33 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/05/08/hello-kitty-vibrator/

Last paragraph

“…no matter how pleasing it may be the woman…”

Should be, “…no matter how pleasing it may be TO the woman…”
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:36 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/05/01/hello-kitty-brief-underwear/

1st paragraph

“I can’t imagine that anyone would actually think that a guy would want to wear them with the possible exception of my wife…”

Improper sentence. Should read, “With the possible exception of my wife, I can’t imagine that anyone would actually think that a guy would want to wear them…
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:38 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/05/01/hello-kitty-brief-underwear/

Penultimate paragraph

“Remember how your mom always told you not to wear dirty underwear in case you got into an accident and had to go to the hospital (or was that just my mom?) That is exactly what went through my mind when I saw these”

Should read,
“Remember how your mom always told you not to wear dirty underwear in case you got into an accident and had to go to the hospital (or was that just my mom)? That is exactly what went through my mind when I saw these”

The question mark should go on the outside of the parenthesis.
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:41 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/06/29/hello-kitty-musical/

2nd paragraph

“It Hello Kitty Hell on steroids…”

Should be, “IT’S Hello Kitty Hell on steroids…”
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:44 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/06/25/hello-kitty-bowling-shoes/

1st paragraph

“…things that my wife will want associated to whatever was just posted.”

The word “to” should be “with.”
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:45 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/06/25/hello-kitty-bowling-shoes/

2nd paragraph

“Of course, my wife thinks these are the cutest thing in the world…”

“Thing” should be “things” in order to agree with “these.”
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:48 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/06/25/hello-kitty-bowling-ball/

2nd paragraph

“Of course, with hello Kitty…”

You forgot to capitalize “Hello.”
fixed–hkh

Comment from SexieBexie
Time: November 20, 2009, 3:50 pm

http://www.kittyhell.com/2007/06/25/hello-kitty-bowling-ball/

3rd paragraph

“Hello kitty”

You forgot to capitalize “Kitty.”
fixed–hkh